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When it comes down to it, text based games arent good when it features high action titles such as Duke Nukem. To add to it, this game is short as well. If it were about 8-20k, I'd be a little happier. No BASIC game smaller is really worth playing. If this were in assembly, I'd be impressed because there aren't many text based games in ASM. Also, the gameplay is horrible. Note to author: please at least add graphics worth watching. The picture isn't bad, but would be best as a small ASM file. I've noticed he's planning an assembly version, good luck, really.
4/10 for trying :-)
Keep working hard, it may pay off.